Thursday, February 23, 2012

The Mystical Breeze

The gushing and groaning never did cease
no window or curtain could keep out this beast
how loud and how violent did one burst ring out
I never did see such a wind thrash about
then all of a sudden a tinkle was heard
it echoed throughout every room, every word
no one was certain what change came to be
but one thing was certain, a mystical breeze

1 comment:

  1. I like this! You use good words with it - "gushing", "beast", "tinkle". The poem is a good description of the wind and then makes a change that is upexpected, but pleasing. Good job!

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