ocean blue
waters clear
salty burn
colors bright
in the deep
of the ocean
creatures great
critters small
live together
forming a world
unknown to man
complex yet simple
peaceful chaos
unite in the ocean blue
waters deep
salty burn
colors bright
in the deep
I like the image of "peaceful chaos". That's a good description of what I think it would be like under the ocean. I like the repeat of phrases, too.
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