Exilerating
peaceful moments
before the fall
pull together
close my eyes
and jump
small moment
lasts an eternity
no breath will come
until that final
second of ------ whoosh
release
splash
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down
frigid waves
eyes wide
see the world
anew
Good use of onomatopoeia - whoosh, splash. Nice poem. I like the way you set it up - the donts going down. Nice!
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